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Narrative Essay: The Photograph — v1

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Jing Wen Krishnan

Content: To begin with, careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Maricel Santos	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	May 12, 2026