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Narrative Essay: The Photograph — v2

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Rohan Krishnan

Content: There is a common assumption that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Jun 27, 2026