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Narrative Essay: The Photograph — v1

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Rohan Krishnan

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Maricel Santos	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Jun 20, 2026