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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v1

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Rohan Krishnan

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kristine Bautista	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jun 8, 2026