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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v3

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Li Ting Lee

Content: There is a common assumption that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	May 7, 2025