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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v2

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Li Ting Lee

Content: Many people believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Maricel Santos	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Apr 29, 2025