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Comprehension: The Last Lighthouse Keeper — v1

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Li Ting Lee

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Aug 1, 2025