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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Li Ting Lee

Content: The passage suggests that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Paolo dela Cruz	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Feb 22, 2026