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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v1

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Li Ting Lee

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Maricel Santos	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jul 28, 2025