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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v1

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Li Ting Lee

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kenji Ong	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jun 17, 2025