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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v3

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Joanna Reyes	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Mar 3, 2025