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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v2

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: There is a common assumption that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Maricel Santos	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Feb 27, 2025