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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Submission

Student
Cheng Yang Yeo
Assignment
Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day
Version
v1
Submitted
Feb 12, 2025
Homework Due
Feb 11, 2025

The Work

Content
Many people believe that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Paolo dela CruzYour argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.GrammarFeb 15, 2025