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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kenji Ong	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Dec 8, 2024