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Vocabulary Drill: Shades of Emotion — v2

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: It cannot be denied that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji Ong	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Jan 26, 2025