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Vocabulary Drill: Shades of Emotion — v2

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Cheng Yang Yeo

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Student
Cheng Yang Yeo
Assignment
Vocabulary Drill: Shades of Emotion
Version
v2
Submitted
Jan 18, 2025
Homework Due
Jan 14, 2025

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Content
It cannot be denied that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji OngGood effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.PunctuationSentence StructureJan 26, 2025