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Discursive Essay: Is Homework Necessary? — v1

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: Many people believe that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jan 2, 2025