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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v1

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Cheng Yang Yeo

Content: To begin with, the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Kristine Bautista	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jan 4, 2025