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Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage — v3

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Isabelle Oliveiro

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jan 28, 2025