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Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage — v2

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Isabelle Oliveiro

Submission

Student
Isabelle Oliveiro
Assignment
Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage
Version
v2
Submitted
Jan 11, 2025
Homework Due
Jan 7, 2025

The Work

Content
It cannot be denied that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine BautistaThe content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.Organisation / StructureJan 21, 2025