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Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage — v2

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Isabelle Oliveiro

Content: It cannot be denied that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jan 21, 2025