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Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage — v1

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Isabelle Oliveiro

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jan 12, 2025