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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v1

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Isabelle Oliveiro

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Oct 19, 2024