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Narrative Essay: A Promise Kept — v1

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Li Ting Tan

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Careful with subject-verb agreement — 'the group of students were' should be 'was'. Also proofread for spelling; I marked four slips in the margin.	GrammarSpelling	Oct 16, 2025