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Comprehension: The Kampong Spirit — v2

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Jing Wen Teo

Content: Many people believe that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Apr 10, 2025