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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v2

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Jing Wen Teo

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Apr 18, 2025