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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v3

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Jing Wen Teo

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Apr 13, 2025