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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v2

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Jing Wen Teo

Content: To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Apr 4, 2025