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Narrative Essay: The Photograph — v1

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Zhi Hao Ong

Content: The passage suggests that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	Feb 26, 2025