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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v1

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Zhi Hao Ong

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Kristine Bautista	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jan 3, 2025