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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v1

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Xin Yi Teo

Content: To begin with, technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Shawn Lim	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Nov 23, 2025