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Discursive Essay: The Cost of Convenience — v1

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Kavya Menon

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Kenji Ong	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	Aug 23, 2024