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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v2

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Kavya Menon

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kenji Ong	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Oct 25, 2024