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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v2

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Zhi Hao Ng

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Student
Zhi Hao Ng
Assignment
Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles
Version
v2
Submitted
May 17, 2026
Homework Due
May 12, 2026

The Work

Content
To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Joanna ReyesThe content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.Organisation / StructureMay 20, 2026