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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v1

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Kavya Menon

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Kavya Menon
Assignment
Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports
Version
v1
Submitted
Nov 16, 2024
Homework Due
Nov 19, 2024

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Content
To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Joanna ReyesThe content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.Organisation / StructureArgument / ContentNov 25, 2024