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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v1

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Kavya Menon

Content: To begin with, small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Joanna Reyes	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Nov 25, 2024