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Situational Writing: Letter to the Principal — v3

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Kavya Menon

Content: There is a common assumption that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Dec 28, 2024