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Situational Writing: Letter to the Principal — v1

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Kavya Menon

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Shawn Lim	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Dec 8, 2024