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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Nadiah Abdullah

Submission

Student
Nadiah Abdullah
Assignment
Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day
Version
v1
Submitted
May 21, 2026
Homework Due
May 21, 2026

The Work

Content
The scene unfolds slowly: technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Joanna ReyesGood effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.PunctuationSentence StructureMay 28, 2026