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Discursive Essay: The Cost of Convenience — v1

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Amirah Hassan

Content: The passage suggests that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	May 4, 2026