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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v1

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Vanessa Pereira

Content: The passage suggests that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jun 24, 2026