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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Vanessa Pereira

Content: There is a common assumption that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Joanna Reyes	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Jun 23, 2026