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Summary Writing: Plastic Waste Passage — v2

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Vanessa Pereira

Content: The passage suggests that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Maricel Santos	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	Jun 24, 2026