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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v2

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Vanessa Pereira

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kenji Ong	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jun 25, 2026