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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Vanessa Pereira

Content: It cannot be denied that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Jun 18, 2026