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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Ethan Pereira

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jan 24, 2026