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Narrative Essay: A Promise Kept — v1

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Ethan Pereira

Content: To begin with, students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Maricel Santos	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Jun 23, 2026