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Vocabulary Drill: Shades of Emotion — v1

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Ethan Pereira

Content: The passage suggests that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jul 28, 2024