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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Yi Xuan Ong

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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