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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Yi Xuan Ong

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Student
Yi Xuan Ong
Assignment
Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus
Version
v1
Submitted
May 29, 2026
Homework Due
May 28, 2026

The Work

Content
In today's world, it is increasingly clear that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Shawn LimStrong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.Argument / ContentJun 8, 2026