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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v2

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Yi Xuan Ong

Content: The passage suggests that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jun 2, 2026