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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v2

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: To begin with, the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Aug 27, 2024