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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Yi Xuan Ong

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	May 29, 2026