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Discursive Essay: The Cost of Convenience — v2

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Yu Han Lee

Content: There is a common assumption that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	May 20, 2026